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Selvaria Bles by iDNAR Selvaria Bles by iDNAR
Selvaria from Valkyria Chronicles. First painting in 16-bit! And probably the last for a while since my gaming rig is having a hard time keeping up :/.

Edit: Quick edit.
Edit2: Gamma correction
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:iconel4an:
el4an Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I love the background. However I have to agree with others in the comments: Her ribcage is too small on the way down and with a pose like that it should be sticking out more also the way her head is attached to her neck seems to be a bit weird.
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LeAKyGrAPHics Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW!!!
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SigillumDeiAemeth Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
FUCKING HOT!
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profutur1971 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
Beautiful image! Beauty, charmed and originality ! Good job ![link]
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KillerApe-Tatsuki Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely PHENOMENAL... the only thing that bothers me about the whole thing is her ribcage is unaturally smaller towards the bottom...otherwise, amazing!
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SSJGoen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Nice.
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TicoDrawing Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
niceeeeeeee........and the boobage too
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robofrost Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sexy
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DemonicBlackCat Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I think the face is pretty but somehow lacking feminity. It looks like a pretty boy but a macho girl.

The boobs, there's something wrong with the boobs (looks like she's just gone into a bad surgery). and the ribcage.

But I love the color, :)
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FYKePrime Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Her body looks gorgeous but her face looks...old serious.
The color is amazing and the shadow effect is really attractive.
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Erehime Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
There's something wrong with her right shoulder and her breast Oo' It looks like her boobs are at the same "place" they would be if she standed "straight". Her boobs are way too low and have to follow a paralel line to the shoulder. The ribcage is a bit small and the angle of the back should be in the middle. Dunno if I'm clear. Much simplier with a drawing ><'

By the way, love the way you coloured the skin. Just awesome, man... It's my weakness ><
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Pure-Lucid Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Am I allowed to do a critique on such a awesome piece??

It's been so amazing watching your art grow over the last.. what.. 6-8 years? lol

The only flaw i really see that stands out the most is that her ribcage doesn't seem to jut out enough properly under her ".. bosom"

Still amazing as ever though ♥
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tygrax Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Professional General Artist
I do love your style and your colouring and everything but the stomach and rib cage and such looks a bit awkward. my eyes went right there. it’s odd. cause the picture is quite lovely.
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Saiyachan Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely as always <3
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UltimateInker Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011   Artist
sweet
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lunailust Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Professional General Artist
I liked this picture .... great ..
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spawnshen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
Nice work. She look more Asian then the original Selvaria.
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spawnshen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
Nice work I like her nose. Looks more like an Asian then the original Selvaria.
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NaganoR35 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student General Artist
whoa!
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JPerezS Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like your textures :D
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fallenakatsuki Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Student General Artist
This is my fave from VC!! Thanks!! So epicly good
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kaazmiz Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
good god...
will we see alicia and edy too:D?
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LUNATICfantasy Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
SEXYYY

p.s. the arm is a little awkward looking...
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1jsp Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
Very NIce!!
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SKdrift Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
I think the main problem with her ribs/boobs is that her stomach looks flat and straight, but her back is arched. Perhaps the bottom edge of her rib cage should be at a different angle and would be sticking out a little more under her breasts? Idk, just thought I'd try to help

Other than that area and the hair in the background that looks kinda flat, this is fantastic. Her face looks intense, and kinda scary. And her outfit is amazing. If it weren't for those two things, and her completely unrealistically large breasts (which I like), I would have thought this was a picture.
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SKdrift Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
I think the main problem with her ribs/boobs is that her stomach looks flat and straight, but her back is arched. Perhaps the bottom edge of her rib cage should be at a different angle and would be sticking out a little more under her breasts? Idk, just thought I'd try to help

Other than that area and the hair in the background that looks kinda flat, this is fantastic. Her face looks intense, and kinda scary. And her outfit is amazing. If it weren't for those two things, and her completely unrealistically large breasts (which I like), I would have thought this was a picture.
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tygrax Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Professional General Artist
I was trying to explain what I saw to be helped with this picture. you explain it fantastically. I agree with your critiques fully.
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killaflip Featured By Owner May 15, 2011
gorgeous! how long did this one take?
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Elinewton Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
Great art!!
What a beautiful body she have!! WOW!!
Really nice breasts!! So beautiful!!
I love her bikini design!!
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dragonjutsu Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
oohh i like her, not in a perverted way, i swear lol
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barani00 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
hot hot
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IAteTheChocolate Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
whoa she looks dangerous :O i love it!!! the detail is so cool!!
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CurstAlchemist Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
Great work
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Aynelle Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Student General Artist
is it me or is her body awkwardly drawn not straight? o.o;; (the line next to the hair)
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Dice9633 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011   Digital Artist
Haha I actually like how you made her face just a bit long -- much like the art design. Very well done though!
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apples-eye Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
this is a great picture, the details are great but honestly it seems her boobs are way to big for the rest of her body.
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UnseenNinja52 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
perfection!!
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Araymous Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Student General Artist
She's very beautiful, great job :XD: :love:
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DMvincent Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Student Artist
perfect
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Sagakarikikkaru Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wow this is amazing!
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kurisutin Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Professional General Artist
Looks good, But something is bugging me about the Back/Ribcage/Boobs area. I think it may be that either her back is arched way to much for her to be that skinny, or her ribcage should stick out a bit more, even if you are going to leave her that skinny. It's hard for me to explain, but as I read somewhere, women have more fat on their bodies even if they are skinny, so this will translate into healthier curves.

The way her upper back curves into her lower back is just all wrong, it should be thicker. It kinda looks like she was wearing a corset, and when she took it off she never went back into proper shape. and the hips should be a bit more round and curvy. The best way to explain it is by picture.

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Yours on the left, Fixed on the right, and lines of what was fixed on the far right.

1.) Rib cage brought out more.
2.) Belly and leg a little more rounded.
3.) Back angle and width fixed.
4.) Little more curvy on the rump and hips. :)

To me that looks more human. :) Hope this helps.
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iDNAR Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea that area definitely needs some work. I've been putting off anatomy studies/practicing but I might start having to as it's becoming painfully clear how much I need it.

Honestly though about your edit, it doesn't seem to work too well either. Seems it would suit a woman standing up strait better. At a camera angle that's closer to a front view. I appreciate your honest feedback though. I'll just...try and figure this out...
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kurisutin Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Professional General Artist
Yea, That's a problem I've found myself having as well. I've always focused on faces, and upper bodies. So in general I found myself having problems figuring how bodies connect and work as a whole. That and foreshortening.

Anyways, Good luck. I know you'll figure it out. :D
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Garm-Fang Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011   Writer
Very good indeed, I just like a lot your style so far pal, I dont know if you do commisions but I hope you do lol =P
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horiuchiha Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
es muy bueno!! felicitaciones!
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Akunichi Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011
Cool
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AMDOMINATOR Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Looks Great :)
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KawaiichiK Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Amazing girl!
seriously!
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Marshall-Arts Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OM to the G!
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Musou-Enrai Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011  Hobbyist
The thumb was OK. The pic itself - naturally, even better. I started looking at the amazing details and when I looked closer to the detailed hair strands I ... I looked away! It was too good for my eyes to take on! :invisible: Words can't express the power this picture emits!
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